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Dear OOO,

Hello, my name is Hyunwook kim and I am working at Korea National University of Transportation, Department of Software in Korea.
I'm writing to ask about what I should write exactly in OOO.

I thought that it is right to write like below in two parts which I should write information about my department:

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If there are any incorrect or missing parts, please let me know.

Thank you for your time and consideration for this matter.

Best regards,
Hyunwook kim